Abstract:
I will need to refine my abstract and fine tune some of the statements I made. Some statements are not backed up with evidence on why they are true. Other statements are just my opinion that I need to get rid of.
Introduction:
He questioned why I used the definition of avatar source here. I thought I was supposed to introduce the topic... most people may have not ever heard of avatars before. I like that source used there, but I may need to rethink this. While talking about how avatars are important in digital technology, i should include the difference with a pre-digital role-playing game and a game like dungens and dragons.
Fieldwork Statement and Source Review:
No bad feedback...
Sources:
Need to find relavence for some...
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